Room 7's "100 word challenge" writing
Tuesday, 22 October 2013
Sophia and Sam B (Year 4)
I am going to tell you a story. A hunted house was owned a slime monster called Daisy.
Daisy was a dirty greenish color but she wasn’t scary.She liked strawberries and donuts.
She lived in a haunted house. No one would take her in because she was made up of slime.(they thought it would spoil their carpets.)
Daisy was very sad because when she tried to ask if she could play- every one ran away :-(
‘I wish that i could have a friend’ she cried one day. And then one day, as if by magic, she did!
Seb and Oscar (Year 4)
Let us introduce you to our monster. It lives in the attick of the night zoo. We like to call it
the Boomywackonator. Now, this monster is locked securely in the attic, the reason of this
is if it wasn't locked up it would eat all the other creatures in the night zoo.
It is super spiky and has a freaky mouth. It has a huge broad chest and you can see his ribs. Its eyes are a glowing red.
Our monster's arms have huge spikes on the end. Its tail has a huge ball of spikes on the end.
Sam M and Esme (Year 4)
One night blood fang came to attack the night zoo keeper.
It has 3 heads (panda,orca,snake), 4 wings, 2 tails, it has sharp tendons (filled with poisons), and a fiery tail.
It had big horns, a fast charge, colossal eyes, big chubby cheeks, thin tummy, strong legs, and a long frightening stare with its green eyes.
It had red lips, a wipe-like tail, sharp claws, pointy ears, spiky tail, very loud and deafening roar, and if you look in to his eyes you will be hypnotised. Its small sharp nose was very good for smelling.
He eats naughty little children for his dinner and drinks blood.
Molly and Alana (Year 4)
Once upon a time there was a zoo, this zoo was the night zoo and there was special
anmial that could build. Once it escaped and took over a house. It smashed and built on it till
it was just how he liked it. It lived in it a week or two then one day, not long after the animal
had smashed the house, the owner came home. She stopped and screamed "oh
goodness gracious me!". Because standing right before the owner was a spiky, dangerous monster
with fiery eyes. It was terrible! Immediately she called the night zoo keeper...
Millie and Sam R (Year 4)
This is the crazy blood sucking monster i would like you to
know about . His back is covered in spikes that are very
Deadly.He never ever came out in sun light because
it burned his skin.He breaths fire.He eats donuts,ice-cream
and pretty much any thing.....
Marta and Baxter (Year 4)
THE FISH WOMEN
In the sea lives not a mermaid but a .....
half fish and half human, it has fins on her arms and legs, it has blue fake scales
all over her shorts, she has blue skin and can hold her breath for 3 days 40 minutes.
Her dad is the lagoon monster and her parents are over 1000000000700 years old but
they're all ways under water so their skin makes them look younger.
She lives in the middle of the sea, she eats sushi, and her parent’s are the
king and queen of the 7 seas.
Leon (Year 4)
This character is named Conehead. He is a male, of course. He is 3 meters tall, very thin and has a very pointy head. His limbs stick out
at all directions, and you can see his ribs! His eyes are like red bouncy balls with only a little black dot in the middle and his nose is
sooooo long that you could easily spear a marshmallow on it! His rear end is as big as a beach ball! He has very short arms, but veeery
long legs! He also has quite big ears and is very very good at hearing!
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