Tuesday 22 October 2013
Leon (Year 4)
This character is named Conehead. He is a male, of course. He is 3 meters tall, very thin and has a very pointy head. His limbs stick out
at all directions, and you can see his ribs! His eyes are like red bouncy balls with only a little black dot in the middle and his nose is
sooooo long that you could easily spear a marshmallow on it! His rear end is as big as a beach ball! He has very short arms, but veeery
long legs! He also has quite big ears and is very very good at hearing!
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Super description, Leon! I could clearly picture your creature as I read.Well done!
ReplyDeleteMrs Maclean, Team 100WC
Hi Leon,
ReplyDeleteSome lovely description here. I love the way you've related his nose to marshmallows, and his eyes to bouncy balls - very detailed.
Great writing,
Mr Connor
Team 100wc