Tuesday 22 October 2013
Sam M and Esme (Year 4)
One night blood fang came to attack the night zoo keeper.
It has 3 heads (panda,orca,snake), 4 wings, 2 tails, it has sharp tendons (filled with poisons), and a fiery tail.
It had big horns, a fast charge, colossal eyes, big chubby cheeks, thin tummy, strong legs, and a long frightening stare with its green eyes.
It had red lips, a wipe-like tail, sharp claws, pointy ears, spiky tail, very loud and deafening roar, and if you look in to his eyes you will be hypnotised. Its small sharp nose was very good for smelling.
He eats naughty little children for his dinner and drinks blood.
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To Sam and Esme
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful, descriptive piece of writing. You set out your descriptive writing clearly and I like how you used paragraphs to separate your ideas.
I could visualise your monster clearly in my mind because you used clear, and also a variety, of adjectives.
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